Misunderstanding Of Male Hippo In Midlife Crisis

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Are my motives questionable Maybe even disagreeable Knowing they will be unforgettable Therefore, under the magnifying glass examine A male hippopotamus lost so much weight He felt he was the bull most likely To stay out late With flamboyant, embellished cows He was no longer A defender of his character Living in abandon His life needed to be abolished His old life he needed to follow Acknowledge his achievements His electric reputation Don't you think it's curious His now disorganization Competitive drive Relocated South

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/8/2024 4:54:00 PM

hadn't thought of a hippo having a mid-life crisis...makes sense if he loses his 'harem' so to speak. Well done, Sara K. Enjoyed it...have a great evening, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/9/2024 2:21:00 AM

Sara B, I think it is possible for that hippo to have a midlife crisis so to speak once it is examined under the magnifying glass. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Joseph May

Date: 1/8/2024 2:16:00 PM

He loses his harem, and things go south, Very nicely penned Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/9/2024 2:20:00 AM

Why, thank you, Joseph. I bet it is very difficult to regain his composure and a new harem. Your visit added a special touch. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 1/8/2024 11:15:00 AM

For me this is a deep metaphor and I hope you are ok.. Your poem skilfully weaves together themes of self-reflection, transformation, and the scrutiny of motives. The use of metaphor and vivid imagery contributes to a thought-provoking exploration of the complexities inherent in personal growth and change. Please remember we only drown if we stay in the water.. all the best Sara..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/8/2024 12:15:00 PM

Yes, maybe that hippo needs to walk on land for a while. LOL..Thanks for the visit and interesting interpretation of my work. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/8/2024 10:21:00 AM

I suppose even with humans everything heads south eventually lol. Hope your new year is going well Sara. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/8/2024 12:14:00 PM

Yep!! South. LOL..So far so good. The reduction in decaf coffee is working like a charm. Thanks for the visit. Sara K