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Misty's Wild Ride

Though Santa never responded to pleas There was just one gift I wanted each year A horse that could run at the speed of light A bold little gal, I never had fear With two high school friends, I went a ranch To ride in 103-degree heat Through the bramble bushes and prickly pears Upon little “Misty” I took my seat The Mustang Adoption Program’s success Sparked ranchers from Tucson, Arizona To give a home to a rust-colored mare Many miles from my home near Daytona Cryptic white markings graced Misty’s neck Like words in Native American code “She’s so small,” I whined, hoping to ride fast But no matter, to the desert we rode Even the roadrunners were envious When Misty gained speed and hit her full stride Warp speed! I clung to the saddle horn As Misty passed larger horses with pride My hat fell on a cactus, sweat filled my eyes My life flashed before me, quite a surprise It seemed like she had wings as we flew Don’t be quick to judge a horse by its size
*For Gregory Paul's "Favorite Animal" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/19/2014 5:22:00 PM
Dear Carolyn: I love this poem...I had a similar experience with a rental horse years ago on Half Moon Bay in California. experience it if you read my poem "Ride a Speckled Horse" I think we are soul sisters...lol I think this link will open it and save you searching for it. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=603557
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Date: 10/2/2014 11:55:00 PM
she sounds marvelous, Carolyn. This was a great entry in the contest. Glad to share 4th place with ya!! Congrats.
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Date: 10/1/2014 4:50:00 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you on te win, Carolyn
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Date: 9/30/2014 2:34:00 PM
- Enjoy reading your winning poem, congrats Carolyn !!! - Wonderful written - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2014 2:15:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/28/2014 9:26:00 AM
Very brilliant write, full of imagery on Misty, Carolyn
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Date: 9/28/2014 7:02:00 AM
stunning imagery Carolyn I was with you out there with the wind blowing in my hair- I do hope this is for the animals contest it will do so well:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:42:00 AM
I can just see you riding full force Carolyn.... A gem....hugs Tim
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Date: 9/28/2014 4:47:00 AM
That's real poetry Carolyn! Amazing write dear! No quick judgements anyways!
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