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Misty Dawn On Loch Rusky

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"Misty Dawn" by award-winning photographer Shahbaz Majeed.

beneath a blushing sky two idle boats savour the bliss of solitude our fingers entwine [Inspired by Shahbaz Majeed’s "Misty Dawn".]

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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/3/2018 9:43:00 PM

The imagery in your poem is simply stunning Paul. Such a romantic write of hushed serenity. Captivated as I am, I again linger and savor the feelings of your blissfully poetic lines. An amazing pic as well. Warmest wishes dear friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 2/5/2018 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Susan; your poetic comments are a pleasure to read...and to savour:) In this case it was the picture which inspired the poem. Sending you warm regards, my friend. // paul

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 2/27/2017 5:48:00 PM

A real gem Paul, goes with the pic so well, thanks for sharing:-)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/28/2017 7:33:00 AM

Thank you, Keith; your complimentary remarks are truly appreciated. Regards ~ paul

Doug Vinson

Date: 2/21/2017 11:07:00 PM

7. When I read something like this - and it's not all that often - all the myriad colors of space look down and smile. Such beauty in such a perfection. Cheers, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/22/2017 7:57:00 AM

You are too kind, Doug:) Thank you for the encouragement. Regards // paul

Lynn Marie

Date: 2/20/2017 5:00:00 PM

so serene is the picture you paint, i wish to insert myself into your beautiful vignette..:-) blessings, lynn

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 11:32:00 AM

You are welcome, Lynn :) Thank you for the lovely comments! Warm regards // paul

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/13/2017 1:41:00 AM

Great write. Simple and powerful, Kai

Paul Callus
Date: 2/13/2017 10:33:00 AM

Many thanks, Kai; your comments are appreciated. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2017 6:01:00 PM

Since I can't find one that I have not already read and I have many other comments to do, I am coming to this one again to FAVE it.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/13/2017 10:10:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea....much appreciated. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2017 5:07:00 PM

fantastic tanka writing. ZOWZA

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2017 12:17:00 PM

Zowza is an awesome exclamatory 'word', Andrea :) Thank you! Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2017 2:07:00 PM

Being offshore in a boat can be quite the romantic experience, Paul, and your poem is a beautiful description that goes well with the photograph. Some of the most romantic moments I can remember were on the boat I owned. I love the photo as well as the poem. A fave for me! Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 2/5/2017 3:04:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely feedback, and the fav, Carolyn. I've been on boats belonging to friends, but never had the pleasure of owning one! Hugs // paul