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Mistry of Life

Same puzzle, same math Same circle, same path One bore, another go one rise, another fall Life’s full of unexpected coincidence and surprises Won’t know what’s gonna happen the next seconds Same dream, same vision Same goal, same ambition One earn another loose One hurray another buzz Life’s full of diversal events Though face whatever it holds Same world, same revolution Same word, same question One come throne another overthrown One blossomy grown another weaken drawn Life’s full of unpredictable mystery Can’t be unraveled even if it dug way deeply

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/19/2016 7:58:00 PM
There is a level of angst that is unavoidable I get it. That line "one earn one loose," am I correct in using "lose". Nice piece
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Date: 2/15/2016 4:08:00 PM
selam, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2015 2:28:00 AM
Selam, Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 11/12/2013 6:26:00 PM
The riddle of life can't be resolved, only a moment here and there can be teased from the mesh and possibly understood. I read and re-read your poem. Still there's so much more. Splendid.
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Date: 3/21/2013 3:52:00 PM
Interesting ideas. "Life's full of 'diversal', should be 'diverse' events". How true! "One come throne another overthrown". Very good line. It reminds me of the British Rock Group 'The Who' and their famous song of ten minutes and three seconds - 'Won't Get Fooled Again'. I visited the port of Massawa during the Sixties before Eritrea won its independence so I expect much has changed, hopefully mostly for the better. Best wishes, Peter
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Date: 12/21/2010 9:13:00 AM
Wonderful efforts you, my dear, made for this wonderful topic. Language matters a bit but your thoughts are enviably recommended. I am foreseeing, with the humble prayers of Zaeem Yousaf, you perspective lessonful poet. Thanks.
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Date: 12/14/2010 9:05:00 AM
I will try to be more careful next time Thank you somuch Jose anyway for ur honest suggestions kisses
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Date: 12/9/2010 9:16:00 PM
I'm not sure if you were mispelling words or just using the wrong ones to express your thought. I do know this piece was very hard to understand.
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Date: 12/9/2010 9:50:00 AM
what did u say Carol my poem is among the "very amazing and diverse poetry" WOW what can I say u flattered me Carol. thankyou somuch kisses
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Date: 12/9/2010 9:43:00 AM
Thankyou somuch for welcoming me warmly here in soup poetry Linda and I'm glad u enjoy my first poem here I hope you'll keep visiting my poems in the feature too. kisses
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Date: 12/8/2010 7:01:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight .. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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Date: 12/8/2010 9:22:00 AM
I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Selam. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol
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