Selam Mussie Poet Verse

Mistry of Life

Same puzzle, same math

Same circle, same path

One bore, another go

one rise, another fall

Life’s full of unexpected coincidence and surprises

Won’t know what’s gonna happen the next seconds

 

Same dream, same vision

Same goal, same ambition

One earn another loose

One hurray another buzz

Life’s full of diversal events

Though face whatever it holds

 

 

Same world, same revolution

Same word, same question

One come throne another overthrown

One blossomy grown another weaken drawn

Life’s full of unpredictable mystery

Can’t be unraveled even if it dug way deeply

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Beata Agustin June 26, 2024 at 2:36 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Weston Gregory March 19, 2016 at 7:58 PM There is a level of angst that is unavoidable I get it. That line "one earn one loose," am I correct in using "lose". Nice piece

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2016 at 4:08 PM selam, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A November 20, 2015 at 2:28 AM Selam, Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Mark Peterson November 12, 2013 at 6:26 PM The riddle of life can't be resolved, only a moment here and there can be teased from the mesh and possibly understood. I read and re-read your poem. Still there's so much more. Splendid.

Peter Dorr March 21, 2013 at 3:52 PM Interesting ideas. "Life's full of 'diversal', should be 'diverse' events". How true! "One come throne another overthrown". Very good line. It reminds me of the British Rock Group 'The Who' and their famous song of ten minutes and three seconds - 'Won't Get Fooled Again'. I visited the port of Massawa during the Sixties before Eritrea won its independence so I expect much has changed, hopefully mostly for the better. Best wishes, Peter

Zaeem Yousaf December 21, 2010 at 9:13 AM Wonderful efforts you, my dear, made for this wonderful topic. Language matters a bit but your thoughts are enviably recommended. I am foreseeing, with the humble prayers of Zaeem Yousaf, you perspective lessonful poet. Thanks.

Selam Mussie December 14, 2010 at 9:05 AM I will try to be more careful next time Thank you somuch Jose anyway for ur honest suggestions kisses

Jose Velazquez December 9, 2010 at 9:16 PM I'm not sure if you were mispelling words or just using the wrong ones to express your thought. I do know this piece was very hard to understand.

Selam Mussie December 9, 2010 at 9:50 AM what did u say Carol my poem is among the "very amazing and diverse poetry" WOW what can I say u flattered me Carol. thankyou somuch kisses

Selam Mussie December 9, 2010 at 9:43 AM Thankyou somuch for welcoming me warmly here in soup poetry Linda and I'm glad u enjoy my first poem here I hope you'll keep visiting my poems in the feature too. kisses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 8, 2010 at 7:01 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight .. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown December 8, 2010 at 9:22 AM I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Selam. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol