Mistress

There as she sat waiting for her lover to come, a night watcher silently stood gazing from behind. Time is passing, and candle's light dancing to the silence of the night: Here he is I hear his footsteps coming, or is this the sound of my heart beating fast.

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Date: 1/8/2013 1:53:00 PM
Hi ALI,,making my way to find you here on the soup today. I am so happy to find this poem of yours on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
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Ali Hammoud
Date: 1/9/2013 12:52:00 AM
Hi Linda, Thank you so much i was surprised myself hehe. Love to hear from you again, and promise to read more poems of yours as I have so much going on in my life at the moment, I am taking it easy. hehe. Always Ali
Date: 1/6/2013 9:55:00 PM
sorry typo... it's suppose to read... (I like this abc form
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Date: 1/6/2013 9:54:00 PM
ALI, , it has been a pleasure finding and reading the first poem you posted on the soup. a like this abc form... he he he.. i kind of like the way you hint the naughty desire of yours... love it..LINDA
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Date: 1/6/2013 9:21:00 AM
A lovely write the form is simply Verse [ABC form ex: Any Body Can Do Exercise For Great Hamstrings I Just Kiss Little Men Of Priceless ..etc to the end of the english alphabet there is also one other way to do ABC form] you are a welcomed and excellent writer I look forward to reading more of your writes. Light & Love
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Ali Hammoud
Date: 1/9/2013 3:01:00 AM
By the way Debbie, my wife she is excellent in English and she writes rhymes. She's British her parents are from Ireland. She is always correcting me. I am Lebanese just to let you know. Love, Ali
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Ali Hammoud
Date: 1/9/2013 12:59:00 AM
Debbie, I am so happy you are so kind and I am definitely a good student, I am finding my way still among the great people who I are sharing their knowledge with me. Always, Ali
Date: 12/29/2012 5:31:00 AM
Beautiful poem... I love the part about the woman thinking she's hearing her lover's footsteps advancing somewhere maybe up the stairs but then she also could be hearing the sound of her own beating heart anticipating her lover is near. That was so nice!
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Date: 1/9/2013 12:56:00 AM
Hi Aysha I'm sorry i didn't reply earlier. I love your interpretation You put it perfectly. Love Ali
Date: 12/23/2012 5:37:00 PM
Beautiful picture Ali! Welcome to poetrysoup :)
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Date: 12/24/2012 5:18:00 AM
Well thank you Jessica k, I'm glad you liked it and happy to share with you my poems! Merry christmas. Ali
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