Randy Freie Poet Rhyme

Mistral Winds

Driven by the Mistral wind

My soul vanquished by the sea

On a course that has no end

Still, where I was meant to be

Mesmerized by ocean tides

As if Heaven here on Earth

Lonely though, my heart abides

I sail further from my birth

Weathered by the salty brine

Now my life's adrift and free

Cradled on this boat of mine

Mistral Winds still carry me

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Sam Scott February 8, 2024 at 4:37 AM This is one of my favourites of yours, Randy. It just feels right, reads right and I like the sentiment and the format. A punchy rhyme. And I like the story element to your poetry too. (gonna fav) Randy Freie February 14, 2024 at 10:38 PM Thanks Sam, sorry I took so long to respond to your comments. I didn't see it till today. I appreciate all the positive feedback. Take care brother.