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11/12/2025 for A Poem Based On A Song - Old or New Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

Mister Tambourine Man, Play that Song Again

Once upon a song, through the rings of smoke, 
down the foggy ruins of time, they spoke 
to me, straight from Bob Dylan’s potent pen. 
Mr. Tambourine man, play that song again.

These words had introduced me to a world, 
as a new consciousness burst and uncurled. 
It doesn’t seem so very long since then.
Mr.  Tambourine man, play that song again.

The jingle-jangle morning is not bright,
It’s now the crumbling, creaking dead of night,  
and I’m a long forgotten, aged man.  
Mr.  Tambourine man, play that song again.

As from the world, it’s time to take my leave, 
on this, my prayerful, final, earthly, eve.  
Remember me.  Don’t forget to say amen.  
Mr.  Tambourine man, play that song again.

In honor of “Mr. Tambourine Man”, written and sung by Bob Dylan (1965), covered by many.
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May Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:41 AM
Congrats on your win David, Very nicely penned
Crandall Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:50 AM
Thanks, Joseph!
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 3:05 AM
I often seem to miss the mark on what sponsors are looking for in a contest too, but you hit it out of the ball park here my friend!
Crandall Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 6:07 PM
Thanks, Terry!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:34 PM
Wow! Amazing job, David! I liked your approach...for the record "Mr Tamborine Man' was one of my favorites from 'back in the day.'
Crandall Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 6:06 PM
Yes, what a great song! Thanks!
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 3:55 PM
Great job. I could not figure out exactly what the sponsor wanted. Now I think I get it and will search my oldies. I am sure I have done this kind of thing!
Crandall Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:15 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I hope I took a good approach. I've been known to miss the mark of what the sponsor is looking for in some of these contests, though.
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