Mister Moon

Oh Mr. Moon, 
Come back to me so soon:
Life seems to be despondent,
Without you shining on.

See you by my window tonight,
Before I lost my sight.
With this feelin' so nostalgic..
Ease the emotions of melancholic.

One night,you have shown your beauty.
Your  face is in felicity,
My emptiness inside is blown away
I am feelin' so complete, I would say.

Oscilliating in the rhythm of the wind
I hope this would never end.
My heart is filled with so much happiness.
Oh, Mr. Moon, you have created my night so perfect.

Can I ask you a request?
Please send my sweet caress,
To the man I love in Buenos Aires.
Oh, Mr. Moon, come back to me so soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/24/2021 9:20:00 AM
Ahh!!! Sharing love by long distance even the moon can connect you with them. I enjoyed reading this one today. Sara
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Rocell Grace Aranas
Date: 12/5/2021 5:54:00 PM
Hi Sara! Thank you for spending time.
Date: 4/14/2020 7:19:00 PM
I'm over the moon for this poem. This wonderful. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens
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Rocell Grace Aranas
Date: 4/29/2020 6:57:00 AM
Thanks...yap, everything is fine.
Date: 4/14/2020 10:08:00 AM
Mr. Moon poem speaks about a beautiful life the moon evokes when it shows up. Its beauty gives happiness inside of me. It is so romantic as well specilly when it shines thru the night. The full moon also brings back the memories.
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