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Mistakes We Make

Mistakes we make, keep us awake As we learn to discern Calm as a lake, of life partake Radiant in bliss burn In here and now present Mindful eye cognisant Dwells in the joy current Melting snowflake Mistakes we make 29-October-2021 Quietus
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Buhagiar Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Well composed.
Seeker Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, Victor!
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