Mistaken Identity

As the line’s listless structure leapt into attentive control;
It’s purpose for existence instantly acknowledged.

The double-tapered weight-forward shooting line’s condensation,
Informed of its instant transformation,
Leaps to the water’s corresponding constitution,
Each droplet acting as spherical asteroids of deception on the current’s rippling surface.

Instantly, a silent connection has arisen.
One derived out of technology,
Entombed in the cosmology of the seasons,
Originating before explorations in genetics.

Taking solice in a meal of two moons,
How could one resist this temptuos delight?
Emerging with swarms of life; Analgous in size, shape, and color,
Cleaverly disguised in the guile of organic structure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 8, 2012 at 10:47 AM
A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Matthew. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol
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June 8, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Well right back at ya sunshine and peaches!!, thanks for the kind words!!-)
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June 8, 2012 at 3:05 AM
You're really good
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