Mistaken Identity

On holiday in Orkney in 2017
Visited a historical site 
“Four adults please”
Got three adults and a concession 

Concession? What???!!!
Who’s the concession?
There are no students 
Or over 60s in our party 

It was a case of mistaken identity 
They thought I was too young to be an adult 
They didn’t think to ask my age
Or for student ID

I was twenty three years old 
With no student ID
I was unemployed 
Nothing to say unemployed are concessions

We queried it
They wouldn’t change it 
This mistake meant that 
I couldn’t get my money’s worth 

It was a silly mistake 
No ID means no concessions
They should have changed it
So I could get my money’s worth 

Since then I have wondered 
Why anyone would sell
A concession ticket 
To a non concession 

26/07/21
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Alex Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 6:31 AM
An interesting write with a natural query. Beautiful.
Smillie Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Thank you very much. I am glad this mistake only happened once.
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