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Mist On the River

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Mist rises quiet
Thru the liquid reflection
A river’s silence
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Foggy mornings weigh
Gentle on my thoughts, my heart
Cooling my spirit
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Sweet whispers grumble
Across smooth stones, in rapids
Venturing past pines
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The edge of midnight
Soothing as a soft creek flow
Through whimsical joy
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Moonlight reflects hope
Against the water’s deftness
Calling the calm shore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/27/2019 2:59:00 PM
'...across venturing pines:' What a beautiful, promise-wrapped image, Gina! So nice. Thanks for this haiku treat! Season's best, Gershon
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Date: 11/26/2019 7:05:00 PM
what a beautiful string of haikus creating a wonderful poem... love this Gina :) hugs
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Date: 11/26/2019 8:48:00 AM
This was beautifully done my friend. Loved this Gina.
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Date: 11/26/2019 7:49:00 AM
- Beautiful, Gina ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2019 6:18:00 AM
Well written Haiku and I love that last one, Gina :)
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Date: 11/26/2019 3:04:00 AM
Beautiful lines...
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