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Mist By the Sea

In
Stillness
I dream of
Your last salt tears
kiss

girlfriend-boyfriendlanterne

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John Michaels

April 8, 2017 at 9:34 AM

Very short form, but packed with emotion. Well-written! Regards, John.

Debbie Duncan

October 1, 2012 at 11:11 PM

cool poem,,,, was expecting a half long poem .

Debbie Guzzi

September 2, 2012 at 2:09 PM

this is a sadone!! Try to remember her happy face. Light & Love

Charmaine Chircop

July 6, 2012 at 11:02 PM

Extremely beautiful... going to my favs Jim...

Poet Destroyer A

July 6, 2012 at 8:55 PM

James, some sad moments are hard to forget. even in dreams the taste of goodbyes are standing still... enjoyed..pd

Joann Grisetti

June 17, 2012 at 7:07 AM

A poignant lanterne.

Phyllis Babcock

June 15, 2012 at 8:52 AM

Oh this is so beautiful and kinda brings a tear to the eye. Hope you had a wonderful birthday. love phyl

Nette Onclaud

June 14, 2012 at 9:03 PM

heavenly, james... ohh, love the way this lanturne ended... yes!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 13, 2012 at 10:46 AM

Ten words and so beautiful James, love it. - oxox Anne-Lise

James Peranteau

June 12, 2012 at 12:14 PM

I pray that those tears where the happy ones dear poet ! Ah, those fond memories my friend, especially those we dream about ! A sweet and tender write sir ! Have a wonderful week James....much love, james