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Mist by the Sea

In Stillness I dream of Your last salt tears kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/8/2017 9:34:00 AM
Very short form, but packed with emotion. Well-written! Regards, John.
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Date: 10/1/2012 11:11:00 PM
cool poem,,,, was expecting a half long poem .
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Date: 9/2/2012 2:09:00 PM
this is a sadone!! Try to remember her happy face. Light & Love
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Date: 7/6/2012 11:02:00 PM
Extremely beautiful... going to my favs Jim...
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Date: 7/6/2012 8:55:00 PM
James, some sad moments are hard to forget. even in dreams the taste of goodbyes are standing still... enjoyed..pd
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Date: 6/17/2012 7:07:00 AM
A poignant lanterne.
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Date: 6/15/2012 8:52:00 AM
Oh this is so beautiful and kinda brings a tear to the eye. Hope you had a wonderful birthday. love phyl
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:03:00 PM
heavenly, james... ohh, love the way this lanturne ended... yes!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/13/2012 10:46:00 AM
Ten words and so beautiful James, love it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/12/2012 12:14:00 PM
I pray that those tears where the happy ones dear poet ! Ah, those fond memories my friend, especially those we dream about ! A sweet and tender write sir ! Have a wonderful week James....much love, james
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Date: 6/11/2012 6:32:00 PM
such romance!! Light & Love Jimbo
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Date: 6/11/2012 1:37:00 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work...Sara
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