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Mist and Smoke

Abandon to the cosmic mind and then
Forget that you stand in place and time, for
The universe is manifest in those
Pebbles on this beach – primordial kind.

Lethargic clumps of seaweed, discarded
On the sands; like sleeping bodies dreaming.
There must be a billion stars overhead –
A trillion beaches – dreamer’s contagion.

I light a cigarette and watch the smoke
Mingle with the mist. I see through you, like
The mist and the smoke – it gives no pleasure.
Dreamers drenched with regret. I suck on my 
Cigarette – one last drag and walk away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 7:25 AM
I really like this one! I can see you lighting the cigarette, etc..
Delacroix Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 4:43 PM
Here, here! :) Sounds like a finality.
Brown Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:19 AM
Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us today David. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 9:56 PM
Powerful third verse David.. good decision in the poem.. and in life.. a brilliant piece my friend.. expressive lines to impress the reader ..luv..ciao..
Culverhouse Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 5:43 PM
Those things are gonna kill ya... ;) just like cheese burgers are gonna get me one day. What a way to go!!
Devonshire Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 4:53 PM
Powerful images, David. I especially like the last verse whey you say, "I see through you, like mist and smoke." Sometimes happiness seems so far out of reach. Beautifully written, my friend. Love, Carolyn
A  Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 4:41 PM
A WoNDERFUL PoEM 2 READ, tAKE CARE & ENJOY YoUR SELF*luv~SKAT
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 4:03 PM
A truly remarkable piece David. (Soup mail)
A   Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 3:50 PM
interesting one,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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