Mist

Mystify my chronicle in your cloud of passion
Intertwine our humble universe in one ration
Slowly pass the time to make the ascension
Thus our love is the greatest invention.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 30, 2011 at 4:59 AM

A belated congratulations Ana-Maria on your win in Brian Strand's "One Single Four Line" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

June 10, 2011 at 1:10 PM

what a wonderful last line this has, Ana-Maria.So you are still here at soup, as I can see from your win in this contest. good to see you. Congrats!

Ana-Maria Bituna

May 26, 2011 at 3:15 AM

Thank you all !

Nette Onclaud

May 24, 2011 at 9:03 PM

smiling cheers for this your special win, ana... just amazing! :) huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 24, 2011 at 2:11 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Ana

Derrick Burton

May 24, 2011 at 2:03 PM

Enjoyed reading today have a good one.

Andrea Dietrich

May 24, 2011 at 2:00 PM

awesome how you did it acrostically. Very interesting topic, Ana-Maria. Are you the same Ana=Maria I used to comment to a lot? If so, where have ya been lately??

Ana-Maria Bituna

May 25, 2011 at 12:26 AM

Andrea, hate to disappoint you but i am not the "Ana=Maria" that you know, I am Ana-Maria from Romania, so the place where i live should give you a clue. :) , but hey , thank you all the way