Missing You

You promised you'd never break my heart never make me cry rather die than live without me. You broke that promise broke my heart, made me cry you have gone and left me rather, I'm the one without you. Early mornings I sit on the deck coffee and your favorite biscuits my company and memories hover on the border of pain. Thin fog floats lazily over the marina faint mist is a curtain peeling back a palest shade of blue translucent as my sense of unhappiness that's taking a long time dying. Before remembrance vanishes I savor this luxury of missing you.
@jjote 080215
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lasarus Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 11:55 AM
I feel you, Josefina. We get hurt, we cry, and yet we still miss that person. Good write.
Costales Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 7:44 AM
you're right. the years may go by but still at the back of your mind the memories can pop up and linger on
Ward Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:13 AM
Yes, missing someone can feel like that. A 7. Kind regards, Julia
Costales Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 7:45 AM
Thanks Julia for dropping by
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