Larry Bradfield Poet Rhyme

Missing Muse

I walked in the garden of good and evil early one morn in the dew
There were spiders and snakes and angels with harps hell bent to inspire the pen
Ah, but the muse took a nap as I was left with droll thoughts that were but few

1-4-20
Contest: Threesome
Sponsor: Silent One

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Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2020 at 6:18 PM I like this one using the metaphors of the garden . Congrats for the win. Larry Bradfield January 17, 2020 at 7:40 AM Thank you, Andrea

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2020 at 2:06 PM - Congratulations so much on your winning poem :) - // Anne-Lise Larry Bradfield January 17, 2020 at 7:40 AM Thank you!

John Watt January 13, 2020 at 2:08 PM Don't we all know that malady all too well! Well done ~ John Larry Bradfield January 17, 2020 at 7:40 AM Thanks, John

Eve Roper January 12, 2020 at 12:44 PM Congratulations on your win in Silent One’s “Threesome”. Hugs Eve Larry Bradfield January 17, 2020 at 7:41 AM Thank you, Eve

Jenish Somadas January 12, 2020 at 11:08 AM Why too many?These 3 lines are enough for winning hearts.. Great win..Congrats.. Larry Bradfield January 17, 2020 at 7:41 AM Thank you!

Silent One January 12, 2020 at 7:26 AM We've all been there Larry.. it wakes up after a while... Congrats on your placement in the contest.. Larry Bradfield January 17, 2020 at 7:42 AM Thank you, kind sir!