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M If leaves were linked tight to a tree, would they still scatter? S S If memories were make believe, would they still matter? N G 11-21-2020 Kim’s Acrostic Play Contest

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Date: 12/2/2020 1:13:00 PM
Juliet congratulations on your win. This is a wonderful pairing of your thematic word to your thoughtfully crafted words and questions.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/2/2020 7:55:00 PM
Thanks, Sam.
Date: 11/25/2020 7:19:00 AM
Hi Juliet, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/30/2020 8:55:00 AM
Thanks, Alexis. You too.
Date: 11/25/2020 6:43:00 AM
A lovely mood write, Juliet! Congrats on second place!
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/30/2020 8:36:00 AM
Thanks for the contest, Kim. It was fun to try a different take on acrostic.
Date: 11/21/2020 8:12:00 PM
i think some make believe memories would matter, especially if they helped get us through a rough time... like the way you put this one together...best wishes in the contest! hugs
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/30/2020 8:35:00 AM
So true. Thanks, Sandra.
Date: 11/21/2020 4:25:00 PM
I think they would matter. I swear some of my memories are make believe.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/21/2020 8:09:00 PM
Thanks for your comments. Memories are likely flawed as time passes and we forget parts, filling in the blanks with what seems to make sense. Regardless, It still matters as much as emotion and thought give to it. The leaves seem to only be linked seasonally, but if they held on forever they certainly wouldn't scatter.

Book: Shattered Sighs