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Missed Opportunity

An inch past the worst sizzlin heat since Yahweh created Summer, boy 'twould have been supremely sweet to load up the trusty Hummer and head cross the continent's breeze to chill under mountains neath pine trees.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/21/2011 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Nancy
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Date: 9/19/2011 1:10:00 AM
swaying with a need for freedom, nans... cheers and more cheers to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win in John's contest, Nancy. Enjoy it! Love, Annalise
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nancy. Nice going luv Ralph
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:37:00 PM
Nancy, thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Verse entry. Agape, Moses.
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Date: 9/18/2011 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Nancy
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Date: 9/18/2011 2:32:00 PM
CONGRATS NANCY ON ANOTHER GRAND WIN WITH LOVELY LINES OF POETRY LUV..
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Date: 9/18/2011 12:13:00 AM
"an suck on peach or plum," johnson slipped, came n went...yum, great poetry little babe! SOME...
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Date: 9/16/2011 6:59:00 AM
You make it sound more than interesting it already is. Shouldn't this come under "Rhyme" to? You've done a great job with it.
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Date: 9/15/2011 7:22:00 PM
wonderful adventure with these words Nancy luv.. and .. I would stay ..am a heat baby .. so exciting this piece luv..
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Date: 9/15/2011 7:01:00 PM
hummer?? must be nice... We are going to see the play on Saturday and hopefully it will be thrilling.
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Date: 9/15/2011 6:51:00 PM
This year kind of gives new meaning to "the long hot summer", I agree, and I thought your poem expressed this vividly. A superb verse!
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