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Missed

Distill emotion to one cliché “I love you” call it poetry Wrap all your feelings in colorful box, ribbons, call it greatest gift Inflated ego sworn superiority call it all I need I hear no trace of regret in the voice speaking of indiscretions I see no sign of truth in the dark eyes that claim to love me only I feel not the touch of kindness from hands that give only when they need Hit-and-run kisses when all I need is for you to linger a while Beware the high ground only time until the fall inevitable Singular captures only the essence of one and that one is you I lost myself there sometimes I think you love me for bending to you So say it’s untrue though every verb indicates quite the contrary I can not believe manipulated words when you’re hiding your eyes Redeem, for this heart that fell blissful into you is reaching out still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 10/18/2008 11:21:00 AM
Wow...you did a wonderful job with this form, Tracy! Sad, and moving, and clever. Congratulations on being featured this week. Well deserved, for sure!!! ~ Best wishes, Carrie
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Date: 10/18/2008 10:34:00 AM
An excellent Senryu! Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup! Peace always, John
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Date: 10/16/2008 5:05:00 PM
Very clever use of this form, Tracy. I never thought of doing a continuous line of thought like this using the 5-7-5 format. While this was a sad write, there is a lot being said in it and its just excellent writing! Very well-deserved feature this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/15/2008 3:11:00 PM
Tracy what a great series of Senryu's you have penned here - Congrats on having them featured this week
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Date: 10/15/2008 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Tracy.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/13/2008 3:18:00 PM
Amazing poem, Tracy. I love the Senryu form, you chose, it fits perfectly, and deserves being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/13/2008 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations Tracy, on "Missed" being featured. Love is often blind, sometimes a co-dependence. One of my favorites from the 60's. "You Don't Know What You've Got Until You Lose It" by Ral Donner. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 10/13/2008 5:13:00 AM
Wow. I have trouble writing even one of these. Truly amazing. Congrats Tracy on your excellent poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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