Missed

Distill emotion
to one cliché “I love you”
call it poetry

Wrap all your feelings
in colorful box, ribbons,
call it greatest gift

Inflated ego
sworn superiority
call it all I need

I hear no trace of
regret in the voice speaking
of indiscretions

I see no sign of
truth in the dark eyes that claim
to love me only

I feel not the touch
of kindness from hands that give
only when they need

Hit-and-run kisses
when all I need is for you
to linger a while

Beware the high ground
only time until the fall
inevitable

Singular captures
only the essence of one
and that one is you

I lost myself there
sometimes I think you love me
for bending to you

So say it’s untrue
though every verb indicates
quite the contrary

I can not believe
manipulated words when
you’re hiding your eyes

Redeem, for this heart
that fell blissful into you
is reaching out still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 10/18/2008 11:21:00 AM
Wow...you did a wonderful job with this form, Tracy! Sad, and moving, and clever. Congratulations on being featured this week. Well deserved, for sure!!! ~ Best wishes, Carrie
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Date: 10/18/2008 10:34:00 AM
An excellent Senryu! Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup! Peace always, John
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Date: 10/16/2008 5:05:00 PM
Very clever use of this form, Tracy. I never thought of doing a continuous line of thought like this using the 5-7-5 format. While this was a sad write, there is a lot being said in it and its just excellent writing! Very well-deserved feature this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/15/2008 3:11:00 PM
Tracy what a great series of Senryu's you have penned here - Congrats on having them featured this week
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Date: 10/15/2008 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Tracy.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/13/2008 3:18:00 PM
Amazing poem, Tracy. I love the Senryu form, you chose, it fits perfectly, and deserves being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/13/2008 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations Tracy, on "Missed" being featured. Love is often blind, sometimes a co-dependence. One of my favorites from the 60's. "You Don't Know What You've Got Until You Lose It" by Ral Donner. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 10/13/2008 5:13:00 AM
Wow. I have trouble writing even one of these. Truly amazing. Congrats Tracy on your excellent poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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