Miss You

Gloom resides deep with in;
Heavy as a thousand tons,
thick and black as street tar,
I miss you so much my son.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 10:35 PM
bless you joanmarie
Vaso Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 11:52 PM
I can only say, beautiful poem, and 1000 hugs to lift your heavy heart. Hugs
Peranteau Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 10:33 AM
Thank you, Appreciate so much your encouragement. Have a blessed day.
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 3:42 PM
oh so deep and so sad:-( hugs jan xx
Peranteau Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Thank you.
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