Miss You

I miss you Can't get you off my brain I miss you It's driving me insane For a while my life has revolved around you Can't help wondering if you miss me too It's weird I'll probably never show you this For fear You'll know what my true feeling is Had to get it out somehow I wish you knew How much I miss you

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/8/2013 11:47:00 PM

It is very scarey letting someone know the power they hold over us. Well expressed emotions. Hugs Rick

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/12/2013 8:52:00 AM

That is so true! *Hugs back*

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/7/2013 12:30:00 AM

I can't give any better advice than Drake and Donna just said below me. Keeping it to yourself and nothing will ever change... if I'm speaking bluntly. Nicely written!

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/7/2013 8:42:00 AM

I know, I know. You're all totally right! I'm just...a coward. Lol. Maybe I will soon...

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/6/2013 10:50:00 PM

Don't hold back. Tomorrow isn't promised. A very nice piece!

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/7/2013 8:41:00 AM

That's so true! Thanks so much. :D

Donna Jones

Date: 6/6/2013 8:46:00 PM

Show them!!!!! Tell them!!!!! Sweet poem....

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/7/2013 8:40:00 AM

Haha, aww!!! Thank you! :) Ahhh, I gotta stop being a chicken. lol!