Caleah Buil Poet Rhyme

Miss You

I miss you
Can't get you off my brain
I miss you
It's driving me insane
For a while my life has revolved around you 
Can't help wondering if you miss me too
It's weird
I'll probably never show you this
For fear
You'll know what my true feeling is
Had to get it out somehow
I wish you knew
How much I miss you

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Richard Lamoureux June 8, 2013 at 11:47 PM It is very scarey letting someone know the power they hold over us. Well expressed emotions. Hugs Rick Caleah Buil June 12, 2013 at 8:52 AM That is so true! *Hugs back*

Timothy Hicks June 7, 2013 at 12:30 AM I can't give any better advice than Drake and Donna just said below me. Keeping it to yourself and nothing will ever change... if I'm speaking bluntly. Nicely written! Caleah Buil June 7, 2013 at 8:42 AM I know, I know. You're all totally right! I'm just...a coward. Lol. Maybe I will soon...

Poet Tacito June 6, 2013 at 10:50 PM Don't hold back. Tomorrow isn't promised. A very nice piece! Caleah Buil June 7, 2013 at 8:41 AM That's so true! Thanks so much. :D

Donna Jones June 6, 2013 at 8:46 PM Show them!!!!! Tell them!!!!! Sweet poem.... Caleah Buil June 7, 2013 at 8:40 AM Haha, aww!!! Thank you! :) Ahhh, I gotta stop being a chicken. lol!