Miss You

Inspired by the song Fix You by 
Coldplay

My hand on my chest
because my heart bleeds,
Taking breath after breath,
but I still can't breathe,
When I close my eyes,
you're all I see,
That's when it hurts...

While my nights seem long,
my days stay gray,
And I force a smile but
it just won't stay,
My thoughts of you
are killing me today,
Feels like I'm cursed...

Bright has died, and gone,
Dark and night, are home,
And I still cry, and miss you.

I'm all out of love, 
My heart beats slow,
I look up above,
and feel so low,
Footprints on my heart
And I let them show,
What I feel worth...

Bright has died, and gone,
Dark and night, are home,
And I still cry, and miss you.

Still dreams, about your face,
Images of what I cannot erase,
Still dreams, about your face,
I cry...

Still dreams, about your face,
Memories of every warming 
embrace,
Still dreams, about your face,
I cry..

Bright has died, and gone,
Dark and night, are home,
And I still cry, and miss you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 9:35 PM
nicely worded,,,, though it's sad .
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November 21, 2012 at 10:16 PM
AUDONUS,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
Edwards Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Such beautiful sadness Audonus..thank you for the lovely comment you left on my limerick xxx Hugs
Mijares Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 6:10 AM
Time heals wound, you'll see!!!! Lovely poem....^_^
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 2:31 AM
Hartbreak, but sweet and romantic poem Audonus. Like it alot, well done. - Anne-Lise
Taylor Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 2:54 AM
Thank you so much! I enjoyed writing it. I'll be sure to check out your work and return the love as soon as I find more than a minute. Glad you enjoyed
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