Miss Valentine

Violet you're wearing caught my eyes
Glitters all over i saw stars in the sky
Made me wonder, can you be mine?
Oh, i was so dumb, i was so shy.

Your hair shimmered when your dancing
Your steps, your moves, you're overflowing
I came near you and asked you to dance
Miss valentine girl can you give me a chance?

When you held my hand, i lost my soul
Like i've fallin in a deep hole
My body shivered i walked a few
Danced in heaven and let the wind blew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 7:52 AM
Sweet and lovely written Leila, thank you for sharing. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Mijares Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 8:24 AM
thanks for reading my poem anne. it's really an honor...god speed!!!
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