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Miss Valentine

Violet you're wearing caught my eyes Glitters all over i saw stars in the sky Made me wonder, can you be mine? Oh, i was so dumb, i was so shy. Your hair shimmered when your dancing Your steps, your moves, you're overflowing I came near you and asked you to dance Miss valentine girl can you give me a chance? When you held my hand, i lost my soul Like i've fallin in a deep hole My body shivered i walked a few Danced in heaven and let the wind blew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 3/11/2012 7:52:00 AM
Sweet and lovely written Leila, thank you for sharing. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Leila Mijares
Date: 3/11/2012 8:24:00 AM
thanks for reading my poem anne. it's really an honor...god speed!!!