Miss Popcorn

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MISS POPCORN sprouted kernels pop all over the living room missing her mouth 11/21/2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2017 10:40:00 AM

OH, I LOVE this. It's my all time fave food and the way you did that third line was so unexpected. FAVE poem as well.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2017 3:36:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

John Michaels

Date: 11/25/2017 9:00:00 AM

Nice to see a humorous Senryu!! Great write, Kim! Kind regards, John.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2017 3:36:00 PM

Thank you, John!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/22/2017 2:04:00 PM

- The vacuum cleaner fixes it :) - Well done, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2017 4:03:00 PM

And it did! LOL! Miss Popcorn handled the cleanup rather well ;) Hugs, my fine friend!

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/21/2017 8:14:00 AM

Clever senryu ... Feel for the miss ...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2017 1:03:00 PM

Thank you Probir!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/21/2017 6:57:00 AM

I see the picture--well depicted, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2017 6:58:00 AM

Thanks, Vijay!