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Miss Popcorn

MISS POPCORN

sprouted kernels pop
all over the living room
missing her mouth

11/21/2017

foodgranddaughtersenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

November 25, 2017 at 10:40 AM

OH, I LOVE this. It's my all time fave food and the way you did that third line was so unexpected. FAVE poem as well.

Kim Rodrigues

November 25, 2017 at 3:36 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

John Michaels

November 25, 2017 at 9:00 AM

Nice to see a humorous Senryu!! Great write, Kim! Kind regards, John.

Kim Rodrigues

November 25, 2017 at 3:36 PM

Thank you, John!

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 22, 2017 at 2:04 PM

- The vacuum cleaner fixes it :) - Well done, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

November 22, 2017 at 4:03 PM

And it did! LOL! Miss Popcorn handled the cleanup rather well ;) Hugs, my fine friend!

Probir Gupta

November 21, 2017 at 8:14 AM

Clever senryu ... Feel for the miss ...

Kim Rodrigues

November 21, 2017 at 1:03 PM

Thank you Probir!

Vijay Pandit

November 21, 2017 at 6:57 AM

I see the picture--well depicted, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues

November 21, 2017 at 6:58 AM

Thanks, Vijay!

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