Miss Each Touch--Kib

She whispers deep of friendship's grant
Yearning for warm caress,
Alone with memories
Her clan lost in enemy lines-
Fresh dreams this world can't bless
Or stroke a woman’s pain.


Keep It Simple Contest
Hosted by nette onclaud
Aug 1, 2019
www,howmanysyllables.com noted


“I think we miss that touch so much, that we crash 
into each other, just so we can feel something." Crash ,2004
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Inman Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 9:26 PM
A unique interpretation of the quote, very nice.
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Very nice, banjo. I loved that quote as well but did not know how to do it the justice that you did, so I went with a different theme (and still did little justice to it!) congrats for your win
Onclaud Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 3:12 PM
a layered, poignant write with a punch in the end, banjo... congrats on your winning spot and thanks for being part of my contest!
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