Misjudged

Not fair to believe I'm so un-ordinary We're both blood and bone

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/17/2024 6:49:00 AM

Strong, thought provoking senryu. What we share in blood and bone strikes a contrast to what differentiates us in the "un-ordinary." Congratulations! Brian

Aurore Severo

Date: 7/28/2015 9:54:00 AM

few words with deep thoughts, great poem

Jacob Frey
Date: 7/29/2015 10:24:00 AM

thank you very much

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/28/2015 12:39:00 AM

Awesome pen Jacob n a superb win ! Big congrats!

Jacob Frey
Date: 7/28/2015 9:28:00 AM

Thank you very much wasn't expecting this win haha

Skat A

Date: 7/24/2015 4:52:00 PM

JACOB, congratulations, awesome senryu. SKAT LOVE

Jacob Frey
Date: 7/28/2015 9:29:00 AM

Thank you, greatly appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2015 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win a seven. Hugs Eve

Jacob Frey
Date: 7/28/2015 9:30:00 AM

Thank you, glad you liked it.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2015 8:33:00 AM

Many congrats on your win Jacob:-) hugs Jan xx

Jacob Frey
Date: 7/28/2015 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Jan, must be lucky here lately.