Misfit

A life without a meaning is like a woman without child, forced to put on this tough facade but your heart is mild. Everyday you wake up unaware of your next move, waiting for life to take you along its groove. What is love ? it has no meaning for you, cause all your life you've been searching for it. You want a beginning that is bright and new, Cause in this world all you are is a misfit.

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Husna Mirza

Date: 2/1/2014 7:19:00 AM

So true.....lovely piece :)

Madeline Eustice

Date: 1/3/2014 3:42:00 PM

Great poem! The similes you use here are great too. Anyway, wanted to say thanks for the comment on my poem True Agony. :) I wish you well on creating poems and I hope you'll post more for everyone to read.

Ayesha Akhtar
Date: 1/5/2014 3:30:00 AM

Thank You !

Skat A

Date: 12/30/2013 1:58:00 PM

Ayesha, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, This is deep!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Ayesha Akhtar
Date: 1/2/2014 11:34:00 AM

Thank u so much for stopping by :))) You soupers sure are sweet :D

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/27/2013 4:20:00 PM

Welcome Ayesha - I love your first line and so understand its meaning; however I think there are many women out there who decide they don't want to have children and are happy, joyous and free. I see myself in that middle verse looking for purpose. Welcome here to Soup. You'll find lots of us misfits hanging out. love, Kathy

Ayesha Akhtar
Date: 12/28/2013 12:19:00 AM

Thank u for dropping by :) Well there are always exceptions ? Aren't there ? I just joined P-Soup and I'm already in love with the fellow Soupers :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/27/2013 12:49:00 PM

Ayesha, i like the thought of this. Sometimes I am a misfit in my own world. Other times, I am the meaning of love.. A mother, plus more.. , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ayesha Akhtar
Date: 12/28/2013 12:24:00 AM

If we were all to fit in this world, wouldn't we be the same then ?? That would make life completely and utterly boring !Some people are happy with what they have while some are not. Anyways Thank you so much for dropping by and sharing your thoughts on his one :D

Aiyah Torres

Date: 12/27/2013 12:43:00 PM

Welcome to PSoup, Ayesha... ^_6 i hope you enjoy sharing your talent here..This is a page where love and friendship exist..and sure you do FIT here most!!!. ^_^.. more love from me..,AiyaH

Ayesha Akhtar
Date: 12/28/2013 12:24:00 AM

Thank You ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/27/2013 12:04:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Ayesha ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)