Misery Abounds

Such abject misery abounds right about now
Abandon hope all that enter here.
Abort plans of happiness I do implore
My own plans are failing I fear.

Our plans in the offing going all wrong again
Happiness is turning around to obsession
Now of course obsessions not in because it’s lame
I’m just editing my awesome session

I call one happy if you always smile

Everybody join in with one more ultimate quest
And walk along with us this overlong mile
Overlong but it will all work out best 
And let's all break out with a smile even for awhile.

© ~GG~ 08/02/2013 
Entry for David William's Con/vowel contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/3/2013 9:19:00 AM
Mandy, congratulations with your awesome win..xox~PD
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Date: 3/3/2013 6:39:00 AM
Great job by you here Mandy!It is very tough to write a rhyme with those constraints.Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/2/2013 5:50:00 PM
nice write Mandy...congrats on your win
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Date: 3/2/2013 11:58:00 AM
~GG~ !! Congratulations on another great win!! You are such a dear!!! Well done. Love you bunches debs
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Date: 3/2/2013 11:27:00 AM
Congrad's on your winning write.Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2013 10:28:00 AM
Mandy Congratulations on your placement in my contest, an unusual theme for you I thought although the poem itself was great, well done...David
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Date: 2/12/2013 6:22:00 PM
nicely penned Mandy......best wishes
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Date: 2/8/2013 12:57:00 PM
Hi Mandi! I like the sprinkle of darkness here. Great for the contest! Im wanting to enter it but so far I've come up blank.
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Date: 2/8/2013 9:19:00 AM
as poetry love this Mandy,, yet it is so sad , or i'm i reading this wrong...your plans are failing, abandon hope? Why...one wonders
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/8/2013 10:36:00 AM
no my plans are fine harry thanks xx
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