Misery

My arms are outstretched Searching Finding nothing in this lonely, Black pit of nothingness My eyes are tightly shut I am unable to see I open my mouth to scream, Somebody, Please save me from this misery I’ve found no way out I have given up Please don’t come looking for me I am lost and forever I will be, Trapped with misery because we all know, She loves company

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Skat A

Date: 2/10/2010 4:33:00 PM

YUPP...THAT IS DEFENATELY MY KIND OF POEM.COOL ...GOT TO GO READ SOME MORE OF YOUR POEMS.....I.T.

Jay Loveless

Date: 1/22/2010 10:43:00 AM

Ive been here myself. These are powerful, familliar words to me. Take a breath in, center yourself, and open your eyes. perhaps youll find that you can see just a little bit of light. remember, the stars watch over us. xo Rain

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/20/2010 6:07:00 AM

You've really caught the emotion in that one, very well written

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2010 8:04:00 PM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue your creative writings to share with us all.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/15/2010 4:00:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Destiny. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol