Misery

My arms are outstretched
Searching
Finding nothing in this lonely,
Black pit of nothingness

My eyes are tightly shut
I am unable to see
I open my mouth to scream,
Somebody,
Please save me from this misery

I’ve found no way out
I have given up
Please don’t come looking for me
I am lost and forever I will be,
Trapped with misery
because we all know, She loves company

liferhyme

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Skat A

February 10, 2010 at 4:33 PM

YUPP...THAT IS DEFENATELY MY KIND OF POEM.COOL ...GOT TO GO READ SOME MORE OF YOUR POEMS.....I.T.

Jay Loveless

January 22, 2010 at 10:43 AM

Ive been here myself. These are powerful, familliar words to me. Take a breath in, center yourself, and open your eyes. perhaps youll find that you can see just a little bit of light. remember, the stars watch over us. xo Rain

Nick Bagnall

January 20, 2010 at 6:07 AM

You've really caught the emotion in that one, very well written

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2010 at 8:04 PM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue your creative writings to share with us all.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 15, 2010 at 4:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Destiny. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol