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Mirrored Thoughts - With Red Fiery

In another time and age
we could have written a new page
crossing paths on land or sea
brushing cheeks with destiny.
With youthful zest and joy
our ardent quills employ
to mix your ink with mine
with passion so divine
and then the words would flow
to set each heart aglow. 

If our souls could sing and rhyme 
beyond the horizon of time 
to mirror our words with perfection 
with utmost sincerity and affection 
to bring distinct colours and shades 
we seal a bond that will not fade
as we reach for eternity
bathing in blissful affinity. 
Mirrored thoughts on a new page
in another time and age.

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A Paul Callus & Red Fiery collaboration
© 2016

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Manmath Dalei May 28, 2016 at 3:39 AM Dear Paul, An outstanding piece. Nice concept & brilliant lay out..............//:) hugs Paul Callus May 28, 2016 at 8:43 AM Thank you Manmath; your comments are always heartening. Have a nice weekend. Regards // paul

Robert Lindley May 26, 2016 at 7:43 AM A TRULY AWESOME COLLAB! Such a pleasure to read this morn my friends. A7 Added to my fav list.. thanks Paul Callus May 26, 2016 at 11:08 AM Thank you for being always so supportive, Robert. Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Regards // paul

Mohan Chutani May 19, 2016 at 4:36 AM beautiful images from the mirror. congrats Paul Callus May 19, 2016 at 8:21 AM Once again, thank you Mohan for the visits you paid me today...much appreciated. ~ All the best. // paul

Janice Canerdy May 16, 2016 at 5:03 PM A 7 for sure, Paul. This is excellent. Janice Paul Callus May 17, 2016 at 12:54 PM Thank you for the 'excellent' comment and the 7 rating, Janice! Regards // paul

Charmaine Chircop May 14, 2016 at 12:01 AM In another time and age..I always wonder what my life would have been like in the past or future. Lovely poem indeed..Excellent-both of you. Paul Callus May 14, 2016 at 10:10 AM There are moments when we can't help using 'what and if'. Nowadays I mostly think of what's become of people I used to know many years ago! Thank you for the positive comments, Charm! ~ Regards // paul

Mohan Chutani May 13, 2016 at 2:27 AM wonderful, soulful collaboration. Paul Callus May 13, 2016 at 11:24 AM I'm pleased to have you stopping by, Mohan! Thank you for contributing with your lovely remarks! ~ Regards // paul

Edlynn Nau May 13, 2016 at 2:07 AM What could have been! ALWAYS a question of Symetry! Love the mirror images and the fun with rhyme back-and-fourth you two! Good one! Paul Callus May 13, 2016 at 10:48 AM And I love your lovely feedback, Edlynn:) ... you caught on to all the main points! ~ Regards // paul

Mark Peterson May 13, 2016 at 1:21 AM Very, very pleasant to read this. Excellent collaboration and meaningful work. Paul Callus May 13, 2016 at 10:49 AM Thank you, Mark; your comments are lovely and encouraging. ~ All the best. // paul

Red Fiery May 13, 2016 at 1:07 AM I am so glad that Paul collaborated with me...!!! Thank you friends for your kind appreciation..This was a wonderful experience ...Hugs to all of you :) Red Red Fiery May 16, 2016 at 8:41 AM Thank you dearest:)I would love to mix my ink with you again.. And always...hugs Red Paul Callus May 13, 2016 at 10:45 AM Thank you Red....the pleasure was mine!! Maybe we could repeat the experience one of these days:) Hugs ~~ paul

Walter T. Ashe May 12, 2016 at 4:55 PM This collaboration is written "with passion so divine!" This is heartfelt! My admiration to you both! Paul Callus May 13, 2016 at 10:43 AM Your admiration is truly appreciated, Walter!! Thank you. // paul