Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Rhyme

Mirrored Entity

Anguish upon the soul
Tormented with the bile
Of lies it has acquired
By the fear of ghouls.

Yearning now to rip apart
Thick layers of concepts
That only left a sense of unworthiness
Eating at the soul, breaking apart.

But the will to survive
Conquers the wish to give in
And let it all be lost into nothing
For deep down a diamond shines.

Its sparkling quality
Needing to be free to shine
And amaze to great delight
The universe, mirrored entity.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 08.05.10

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Anthony Beesley January 19, 2011 at 4:43 PM enjoyed it a lot

David Byrne August 6, 2010 at 7:50 PM I like this Caroline.............smile!

Doris Culverhouse August 6, 2010 at 2:04 PM enjoyed reading today!

Wilma Neels August 6, 2010 at 1:02 PM Very uplifting and thought provoking write Caroline, hope you'll have a splended weekend, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 6, 2010 at 11:49 AM Powerful write Caroline.. luv your third verse intro lines but the will to survive..conquers the wish to give in.. full knowing the inner depth of this myself... its such a creative write .. happy weekend my friend.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire August 6, 2010 at 11:23 AM I can really relate to the "yearning...to rip apart thick layers of concepts." Life can be so confusing until we find that shining diamond deep within our hearts that will not let us give up. Brilliant, Caroline! Love, Carolyn

Jay Del Fierro August 6, 2010 at 10:21 AM as the diamond reflected universe...which was part of an ongoing theme of mine,which has used the Shamir,as a concsience eating organism which attacks like a trojan horse viral infection...the biblical writings describe it as a worm,which can eat thru the hardest of stones,like a diamond......enjoyed this post......peace , jay