Mirrored Emotions

Oh heart! Won't you bloom your petals tonight
My wearied wings flutter with sapphire hopes
Wild dreams shimmer while I caress their whispers
Let streams of curled memories drench my soul

Let streams of curled memories drench my soul
Wild dreams shimmer while I caress their whispers
My wearied wings flutter with sapphire hopes
Oh heart! Won't you bloom your petals tonight.

August 12, 2020

MIRROR MIRROR Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John lawless
~Winner: 6th Place
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Mcgee Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Oh! heart...a lovely mirror and wonderful words expressed. Congrats Aditi
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 12:48 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 3:58 AM
This poem shows the depth of feelings which accompany the writer through the night. Beautiful, and worthy of a higher placement! ~ Congratulations on your fine win, Aditi. Regards // paul
Kauffman Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 9:55 PM
Beautiful poem of whispered longing to your heart Aditi. A tranparent wish so well expressed! Congratulations on your winning placement. I think this is a fun format and not as easy as it looks! Many blessings and hugs....
Logan Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations on making the winning list, Aditi.
Somadas Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Beautifully penned.. Wonderful touch of mesmerizing poetry.. Good luck Aditi..
Sands Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 3:10 PM
This poem is great Aditi. Well written :)
Watt Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 11:42 AM
"My wearied wings flutter with sapphire hopes". Lovely thoughts here, Aditi, and so nicely arranged in a mirror poem. I wish you the best in the contest ~ John
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 8:12 AM
a beautiful mirror poem, a poem of hope:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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