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Mirrored Emotions

Oh heart! Won't you bloom your petals tonight My wearied wings flutter with sapphire hopes Wild dreams shimmer while I caress their whispers Let streams of curled memories drench my soul Let streams of curled memories drench my soul Wild dreams shimmer while I caress their whispers My wearied wings flutter with sapphire hopes Oh heart! Won't you bloom your petals tonight. August 12, 2020 MIRROR MIRROR Poetry Contest Sponsor: John lawless ~Winner: 6th Place

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/23/2020 2:38:00 PM

Oh! heart...a lovely mirror and wonderful words expressed. Congrats Aditi

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2020 12:48:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2020 3:58:00 AM

This poem shows the depth of feelings which accompany the writer through the night. Beautiful, and worthy of a higher placement! ~ Congratulations on your fine win, Aditi. Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/20/2020 9:55:00 PM

Beautiful poem of whispered longing to your heart Aditi. A tranparent wish so well expressed! Congratulations on your winning placement. I think this is a fun format and not as easy as it looks! Many blessings and hugs....

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/20/2020 2:55:00 PM

Congratulations on making the winning list, Aditi.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 8/12/2020 10:58:00 PM

Beautifully penned.. Wonderful touch of mesmerizing poetry.. Good luck Aditi..

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/12/2020 3:10:00 PM

This poem is great Aditi. Well written :)

John Watt

Date: 8/12/2020 11:42:00 AM

"My wearied wings flutter with sapphire hopes". Lovely thoughts here, Aditi, and so nicely arranged in a mirror poem. I wish you the best in the contest ~ John

Jan Allison

Date: 8/12/2020 8:12:00 AM

a beautiful mirror poem, a poem of hope:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx