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Mirror On the Wall

Mirror mirror on the wall Would you still care if I break or fall , Would you still be there to console me through it all ? After the drugs fade , memories take place and now it's hard too stand tall . I ran out of alchohol now I can hear your judgment pass through the empty hall , the pains getting deeper should I overdose on tylenol? See I'd hang myself but I've already been hung up on the wall . You stare at me you feel my pain but you never call , the stress is weighing on my brain , I'm done playing games , my soul full of pain but I'm just too weak to end it all ! Now mirror on the wall I see the cracks are they outside or within, are they both, which side am I living in? All u do is mock me you ain't my friend , forget you and your friendship this is the end . I got a bullet with your name on it , I may be too weak to end it all but I can start by freeing the man who was hung up on the wall.

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Date: 4/10/2020 9:43:00 AM
You have the depth part solid. And the expression of inner turmoil rings clear. -- last verse brings it home! Truly enjoyed this piece.. A fav... God bless...
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Anthony Bookram
Date: 4/11/2020 9:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it Your comment has given me the encouragement I needed to keep writing.
Date: 3/15/2020 11:56:00 AM
Let me know what u think .
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Date: 3/14/2020 3:59:00 PM
This is nice
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Anthony Bookram
Date: 3/14/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thank you :)

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