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above horizon grace abounds abyss waters whiff of coming storm 6/29/2017
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Lee Sr. Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 5:37 PM
With picture this is very, very nice, Great concept Keep on writing on, Write ON...James Although the top is bottomed and out is in; there is no dividing the horizon; I don't see double, but trouble I see; For in reality is only real..
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 4:37 PM
I love seeing this with the picture, Eve. that last line whiff of coming storm is such an inventive way to say it!
Michaels Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 5:52 AM
Very clever and great imagery... nice piece, Eve!! Regards, John.
Daniel Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Aha, this haiku's so lovely, Eve, love the picture too:)
Kendrick Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 11:09 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..I like the mirror imagine in natural waterways...Creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Warrior Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:39 PM
A storm of a Haiku Eve...very well crafted my friend...god bless...^WW^
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Thank you my dear friend, God bless ~*
Turner Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:06 PM
Bring it on!! Great poem and beautiful photo, Mrs Eve.
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Thank you my dear friend ~*
Trifiatis Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Captivating dear, Eve! Beautiful photo!
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Thank you my dear friend ~*
Sands Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 4:22 PM
This is a beautiful poem and photo. I can smell the rain :)
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Thank you my dear friend ~*
Allison Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 3:47 PM
I love the smell after the rain has stopped I can imagine the smell when a storm is coming could be one of fear! Great poem Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Thank you my dear friend, ~*
Green Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 3:09 PM
Really very beautiful Eve. I just love the fragrance of a coming storm.
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Thank you my dear friend ~*
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