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Some mirrors are cracked Some mirrors so clean Some mirrors biased Some look so serene When you smile in dew My mirror exults In many a hue Yours in pink tumult We wish to live in Eyes in the mirrors Are not we still green How much robbed by years Love looking in glass In flux the red vase _________________________________ Word count: 59 17 May, 2017 Contest sponsored by Laura Loo

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Date: 5/27/2017 5:21:00 PM
Your mirror descriptions! Congrats, Probir!
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Date: 5/28/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thank you ... and your mirror looks more expensive ... Congratulations on your nice success too ...
Date: 5/26/2017 11:18:00 AM
Congrats Probir to win on this nice piece.
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Date: 5/27/2017 12:20:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha ... your Dodoitsu on the same theme is much nicer ... Congratulations on your win too ...
Date: 5/26/2017 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations Probir :)
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Date: 5/27/2017 12:21:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi ... Your Emerald Green has been very beautiful ... Congratulations on your lovely win too ...

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