Probir Gupta Poet Rhyme

Mirror

Some mirrors are cracked

Some mirrors so clean

Some mirrors biased

Some look so serene



When you smile in dew

My mirror exults

In many a hue

Yours in pink tumult


We wish to live in

Eyes in the mirrors

Are not we still green

How much robbed by years


Love looking in glass

In flux the red vase
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Word count: 59
17 May, 2017
Contest sponsored by Laura Loo

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Kim Rodrigues May 27, 2017 at 5:21 PM Your mirror descriptions! Congrats, Probir! Probir Gupta May 28, 2017 at 7:14 AM Thank you ... and your mirror looks more expensive ... Congratulations on your nice success too ...

Anisha Dutta May 26, 2017 at 11:18 AM Congrats Probir to win on this nice piece. Probir Gupta May 27, 2017 at 12:20 AM Thank you, Anisha ... your Dodoitsu on the same theme is much nicer ... Congratulations on your win too ...

Heidi Sands May 26, 2017 at 10:42 AM Congratulations Probir :) Probir Gupta May 27, 2017 at 12:21 AM Thank you, Heidi ... Your Emerald Green has been very beautiful ... Congratulations on your lovely win too ...