Mirror

prill on tranquil loch
and my image rippled out
as words on mind lakes





Won third place in STRAND SELECT D any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Anisha Dutta

January 30, 2020 at 12:15 PM

Too Good. All the best

Jenish Somadas

January 30, 2020 at 10:44 PM

Thank you poetess for your support..

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 30, 2020 at 4:48 AM

Reflection of harmony in your words dearest, Jenish .Superb! Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas

January 30, 2020 at 5:05 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your kind words..

Kim Rodrigues

January 29, 2020 at 9:04 PM

So cool!

Jenish Somadas

January 29, 2020 at 9:06 PM

Thank you Kim for your time and comment..

Sandra Adams

January 29, 2020 at 7:31 PM

wow... striking imagery, exquisite senryu :)

Jenish Somadas

January 29, 2020 at 9:05 PM

Thank you Sandra for your delightful comment..

Kai Michael Neumann

January 29, 2020 at 6:07 AM

Great metaphor. Words on a mind lake. Stunning, Kai

Jenish Somadas

January 29, 2020 at 9:40 AM

Thank you Kai for your kind words..

Juliet Ligon

January 28, 2020 at 11:37 PM

Lovely imagery.

Jenish Somadas

January 29, 2020 at 12:12 AM

Thank you Juliet for your comment and thanks for your placement in your contest..

Jennifer Proxenos

January 28, 2020 at 11:20 PM

Your can almost feel the mind rippling along with your thoughts across this tranquil expanse of water, very soothing serene write. Blessings, Jennifer.

Jenish Somadas

January 29, 2020 at 12:11 AM

Thank you for your profound comment Jennifer...