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prill on tranquil loch
and my image rippled out
as words on mind lakes





Won third place in STRAND SELECT D any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Anisha Dutta Date: 1/30/2020 12:15:00 PM Too Good. All the best Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/30/2020 10:44:00 PM Thank you poetess for your support..

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/30/2020 4:48:00 AM Reflection of harmony in your words dearest, Jenish .Superb! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/30/2020 5:05:00 AM Thank you Demetrios for your kind words..

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/29/2020 9:04:00 PM So cool! Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/29/2020 9:06:00 PM Thank you Kim for your time and comment..

Sandra Adams Date: 1/29/2020 7:31:00 PM wow... striking imagery, exquisite senryu :) Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/29/2020 9:05:00 PM Thank you Sandra for your delightful comment..

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 1/29/2020 6:07:00 AM Great metaphor. Words on a mind lake. Stunning, Kai Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/29/2020 9:40:00 AM Thank you Kai for your kind words..

Juliet Ligon Date: 1/28/2020 11:37:00 PM Lovely imagery. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/29/2020 12:12:00 AM Thank you Juliet for your comment and thanks for your placement in your contest..

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/28/2020 11:20:00 PM Your can almost feel the mind rippling along with your thoughts across this tranquil expanse of water, very soothing serene write. Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/29/2020 12:11:00 AM Thank you for your profound comment Jennifer...

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/28/2020 1:46:00 PM Wow! I really like your profound senryus. Keep them coming Jenish!! Great! :) Gershon Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/28/2020 9:11:00 PM Lol..The mental pipes are clogged..It is not coming as I need..lol..Thank you Gershon..

Charles Messina Date: 1/28/2020 8:24:00 AM Very nice, Jenish. Great Senryu! Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/28/2020 9:37:00 AM Thank you Charles for your kind words..

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/28/2020 8:10:00 AM Great imagery you created in just a few words, Jenish. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/28/2020 9:37:00 AM Thank you Vijay..

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 1/28/2020 8:01:00 AM Very nice poem & read. Have a good day. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/28/2020 9:36:00 AM Thank you Abdullah..

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/28/2020 4:59:00 AM - Exciting ripple effects, Jenish ... which spreads constantly if we allow them :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/28/2020 6:00:00 AM Thank you Anne for your time and comment..

Eve Roper Date: 1/27/2020 11:21:00 PM Beautiful, Jenish, so much sad in such few words. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 1/28/2020 12:41:00 AM Thank you Eve.. But the contest is mine.. why should I enter? lol...