Mirror

prill on tranquil loch and my image rippled out as words on mind lakes Won third place in STRAND SELECT D any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/30/2020 12:15:00 PM

Too Good. All the best

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/30/2020 10:44:00 PM

Thank you poetess for your support..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/30/2020 4:48:00 AM

Reflection of harmony in your words dearest, Jenish .Superb! Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/30/2020 5:05:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your kind words..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/29/2020 9:04:00 PM

So cool!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 9:06:00 PM

Thank you Kim for your time and comment..

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/29/2020 7:31:00 PM

wow... striking imagery, exquisite senryu :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 9:05:00 PM

Thank you Sandra for your delightful comment..

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/29/2020 6:07:00 AM

Great metaphor. Words on a mind lake. Stunning, Kai

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 9:40:00 AM

Thank you Kai for your kind words..

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/28/2020 11:37:00 PM

Lovely imagery.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 12:12:00 AM

Thank you Juliet for your comment and thanks for your placement in your contest..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/28/2020 11:20:00 PM

Your can almost feel the mind rippling along with your thoughts across this tranquil expanse of water, very soothing serene write. Blessings, Jennifer.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 12:11:00 AM

Thank you for your profound comment Jennifer...