Mirage

Mirage shimmering on the horizon- ripples on my forehead dance. 12.11.2020 ‘Mon-O’ Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/21/2020 8:23:00 PM

Oh, this is so beautiful, Carol. I admire your amazing imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/21/2020 9:43:00 PM

Thanks Susan....have a good weekend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2020 2:01:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Carol :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/17/2020 2:37:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2020 2:55:00 PM

back with Big congratulations for your win, CArol.

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/15/2020 6:48:00 PM

Thanks....dear Andrea much love :)

JCB Brul

Date: 11/15/2020 2:04:00 AM

So lovely dear Carol! So spectacular! Congratulations on your TOP WIN!

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/15/2020 3:15:00 AM

Thank you JCB....much appreciated

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/14/2020 10:50:00 AM

So creative and unique, Carol! I love the ripples of interaction between you and the mirage - your dance. Normally they just keep moving ahead of us - out of reach! Congratulations on your first place win!

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/14/2020 7:47:00 PM

Thanks Sam....true I just love a mirage :)