Mirage

Mirage shimmering on the horizon- ripples on 
my forehead dance.  


12.11.2020
‘Mon-O’ Contest
Sponsor- Brian Strand

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Susan Ashley

November 21, 2020 at 8:23 PM

Oh, this is so beautiful, Carol. I admire your amazing imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Carol Mitra

November 21, 2020 at 9:43 PM

Thanks Susan....have a good weekend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 17, 2020 at 2:01 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Carol :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra

November 17, 2020 at 2:37 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2020 at 2:55 PM

back with Big congratulations for your win, CArol.

Carol Mitra

November 15, 2020 at 6:48 PM

Thanks....dear Andrea much love :)

JC Brul

November 15, 2020 at 2:04 AM

So lovely dear Carol! So spectacular! Congratulations on your TOP WIN!

Carol Mitra

November 15, 2020 at 3:15 AM

Thank you JCB....much appreciated

Sam Kauffman

November 14, 2020 at 10:50 AM

So creative and unique, Carol! I love the ripples of interaction between you and the mirage - your dance. Normally they just keep moving ahead of us - out of reach! Congratulations on your first place win!

Carol Mitra

November 14, 2020 at 7:47 PM

Thanks Sam....true I just love a mirage :)