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Miracle Bread

like snow from heaven god’s sweetest manna-festation Oct. 10, 2018 for Maureen McGreavy's Baker's Dozen Poetry Contest

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/16/2018 1:22:00 PM

oh, so clever - love this

Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2018 8:42:00 AM

Creative and worthy of a fine win, Andrea! Congratulations! Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 10/15/2018 7:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/15/2018 4:59:00 AM

I agree it's one of God's best invention. At least the one that makes people smile the most. Congrats on your win Andrea. I'm a bread girl too.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/14/2018 7:16:00 PM

I REALLY like this one, Andrea! Janice

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/14/2018 3:12:00 PM

Congratulations for your win ! :)

Gary Smith

Date: 10/14/2018 3:05:00 PM

Excellent Andrea, congrats. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/14/2018 2:16:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats on your win, Andrea.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/14/2018 10:36:00 AM

congratulations on your win :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/11/2018 9:38:00 AM

This is a super winner, Andrea, very clever:)

Joseph May

Date: 10/11/2018 8:13:00 AM

Very clever last line Andrea..Best wishes in the contest..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/11/2018 2:33:00 AM

This is pretty unique Andrea. Love the play on words. Best of luck in the contest.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/10/2018 9:22:00 PM

oh, so wonderfully clever and beautiful, Andrea. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/10/2018 6:41:00 PM

Hi Andrea, a most creative Haiku you lay before us. A wonderful write from your pen once more Andrea. This Haiku joins the others in my faves. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/10/2018 1:50:00 PM

So clever- love it! ;)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/10/2018 11:18:00 AM

Beautifully put, wonderfully written, deeply thought out, Andrea.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/10/2018 10:33:00 AM

Lovely haiku my friend...ready for a win...love & bread...^WW^

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/10/2018 10:30:00 AM

Nice hakiu Andrea. Tom.

Chris Green

Date: 10/10/2018 10:10:00 AM

This was perfect Andrea. I loved it.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/10/2018 9:15:00 AM

Very witty, Andrea. Well done!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2018 9:04:00 AM

Yes. Manna(what is it) was a God Send. They had to gather it and cook it. I always thought that they just went out and gathered it but when I recently reread that part of the Bible it said that they could either bake or boil it. What about that? Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/10/2018 8:59:00 AM

Cleverly done, Andrea..in just a few words your incorporated biblical significance.