Miracle Bread

like snow from heaven
god’s sweetest
manna-festation

Oct. 10, 2018 for  Maureen McGreavy's Baker's Dozen Poetry Contest
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Horne Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 1:22 PM
oh, so clever - love this
Callus Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Creative and worthy of a fine win, Andrea! Congratulations! Regards // paul
May Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea..
Rose  Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 4:59 AM
I agree it's one of God's best invention. At least the one that makes people smile the most. Congrats on your win Andrea. I'm a bread girl too.
Canerdy Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 7:16 PM
I REALLY like this one, Andrea! Janice
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Congratulations for your win ! :)
Smith Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Excellent Andrea, congrats. :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your win, Andrea.
Roper Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 10:36 AM
congratulations on your win :)
Daniel Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 9:38 AM
This is a super winner, Andrea, very clever:)
May Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Very clever last line Andrea..Best wishes in the contest..
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 2:33 AM
This is pretty unique Andrea. Love the play on words. Best of luck in the contest.
Ashley Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 9:22 PM
oh, so wonderfully clever and beautiful, Andrea. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Raven Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Hi Andrea, a most creative Haiku you lay before us. A wonderful write from your pen once more Andrea. This Haiku joins the others in my faves. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Mcferran Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 1:50 PM
So clever- love it! ;)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Beautifully put, wonderfully written, deeply thought out, Andrea.
Warrior Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 10:33 AM
Lovely haiku my friend...ready for a win...love & bread...^WW^
Cunningham Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Nice hakiu Andrea. Tom.
Green Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 10:10 AM
This was perfect Andrea. I loved it.
Gauthier Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Very witty, Andrea. Well done!
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Yes. Manna(what is it) was a God Send. They had to gather it and cook it. I always thought that they just went out and gathered it but when I recently reread that part of the Bible it said that they could either bake or boil it. What about that? Sara
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October 10, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Cleverly done, Andrea..in just a few words your incorporated biblical significance.
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