Minus Identity Who am i

I am but a shadow, A whisper in the wind,
 a fleeting thought, A ghostly presence.

I am lost in the chaos, Anonymous and alone,
 Drifting through life, Without a name to call my own.

I am undefined, A blank canvas,
A mystery to unravel, A puzzle without a solution.

I am the absence of self, A void of identity,
 A question mark, A riddle left unanswered.

Unencumbered by expectations, 
Just a being, undefined and free.

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Date: 8/4/2024 4:15:00 PM
I sometimes wonder if cartoons had feelings, how would they feel about being a cartoon. But your poem is different. I'll let it be.
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 8/24/2024 12:46:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 8/3/2024 6:01:00 AM
Very good poem
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 8/24/2024 12:46:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 8/3/2024 3:10:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem beautifully written. Thanks for sharing, Les
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 8/24/2024 12:46:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 6/22/2024 1:38:00 PM
I love this very relatable and beautifully written poem Jeanine! Debx
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 6/25/2024 9:35:00 AM
Thank you
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 6/24/2024 3:28:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/22/2024 1:00:00 PM
A well written poem.. I used to feel like this people say cruel or hurtful things at times about us. People may try to change us or try to change our way if thinking. I enjoyed your poem Everyewhere we go people now treat us like a number At the doctor or hospital we have a number National insurance we have a number Dss they get a number its sad We have hope in where we came from And to where we will return one day. When we are lost we will be found. Amen
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 8/24/2024 12:46:00 AM
Thank you so much.
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 6/24/2024 3:28:00 PM
Amen
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