Minneapolis Christmas

reaching for snowflakes —
sunflower in winter white
abandons the sun

12/14/2020
Strand’s Hi-ku 2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 3:53 PM
I enjoyed reading this one. Very creative Ku. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Thanks, Sara! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 7:07 AM
I am now looking up snow flower. Thank you for this.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 10:59 AM
;) hugs-a-million!
Bangalee Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 2:10 AM
just beautiful
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Wolf Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 7:23 PM
I'd say that sunflower is now more like 'white powder!' ~ Abandoned and Forlorn... G.L. in the contest, Kim. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 3:34 AM
Thanks, Gershon. When would a sunflower not fold? ;)
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