Minneapolis Christmas

reaching for snowflakes — sunflower in winter white abandons the sun 12/14/2020 Strand’s Hi-ku 2

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2020 3:53:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this one. Very creative Ku. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2020 4:47:00 PM

Thanks, Sara! :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/17/2020 7:07:00 AM

I am now looking up snow flower. Thank you for this.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2020 10:59:00 AM

;) hugs-a-million!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/15/2020 2:10:00 AM

just beautiful

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2020 3:33:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/14/2020 7:23:00 PM

I'd say that sunflower is now more like 'white powder!' ~ Abandoned and Forlorn... G.L. in the contest, Kim. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2020 3:34:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon. When would a sunflower not fold? ;)