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Mine

Give me broken things, leave me all your shattered thoughts, your chaos is mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/24/2015 4:07:00 PM
Haiku is my third favorite form. But, if I am not mistaken it reads like a senryu or verse. Anyways, I find the KU, to be deep and strong. The way you call it upon yourself is powerful. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 11/22/2015 6:18:00 PM
Ahhh! What a profound Haiku - excellently written. I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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