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Mind's Eye

not admiring her from afar for she was just across the table but i was able to see her hair bounce off her shoulders and follow her low cut neckline taking my time while letting my eyes travel down cleavageland with more bounce but though with sweat on my brow her dessert ful pezones must have caught a chill yet on my side of our tablecloth lake i was erecting a tent until she said you're not using your internal mono logue i've heard every word you've just said

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Date: 3/4/2020 10:58:00 AM
l must have magic powers..l can read my husband's mind..always..lol
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/4/2020 12:09:00 PM
Lol Jackie. Wonderful!!! My mind and ears hear too much lol. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 3/4/2020 8:21:00 AM
Ahhh, NICE.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/5/2020 12:29:00 PM
Tell me about it lol. I'll catch myself saying, "Did I say that out loud?" Then think, "Did I just say did I say that out loud outloud?"
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/4/2020 1:54:00 PM
..too many to count ;),
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/4/2020 9:23:00 AM
How many times have you caught yourself talking out loud but thought you we just thinking in your head lol? Thanks Maureen for always reading and commenting.

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