Home » Poems » Heidi Sands » Mindless Fog

Mindless Fog

the moon shined through haze
                 in this cold winter morning
                      mindless fog below


Heidi Sands

2/4/18

confusionmoonmorninghaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Silent One

February 5, 2018 at 2:26 PM

Great imagery in your haiku Heidi..

Heidi Sands

February 5, 2018 at 2:29 PM

Thank you Silent One :)

Mike Gentile

February 5, 2018 at 9:19 AM

A wonderful Haiku, Heidi and I agree that fog is mindless, very apt description xxoo

Heidi Sands

February 5, 2018 at 10:06 AM

Thank you Mike. I was also referring to foggy mind below watching :)

Vijay Pandit

February 4, 2018 at 4:06 PM

A lovely depiction--I picture the moon peeking and the fog below.

Heidi Sands

February 4, 2018 at 5:22 PM

Thank you Vijay. It was seen this morning :)

Kevin Shaw

February 4, 2018 at 2:36 PM

Hello Heidi, I think Mindless is a good description of Fog. Fog is a strange entity and can be quite eerie, Love your Haiku, Regards, Kevin x

Heidi Sands

February 4, 2018 at 5:22 PM

Thank you Kevin. I appreciate your comment :)

Mindless Fog

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources