Mindless Fog

the moon shined through haze in this cold winter morning mindless fog below Heidi Sands 2/4/18

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Date: 2/5/2018 2:26:00 PM

Great imagery in your haiku Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/5/2018 2:29:00 PM

Thank you Silent One :)

Date: 2/5/2018 9:19:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku, Heidi and I agree that fog is mindless, very apt description xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/5/2018 10:06:00 AM

Thank you Mike. I was also referring to foggy mind below watching :)

Date: 2/4/2018 4:06:00 PM

A lovely depiction--I picture the moon peeking and the fog below.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2018 5:22:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. It was seen this morning :)

Date: 2/4/2018 2:36:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I think Mindless is a good description of Fog. Fog is a strange entity and can be quite eerie, Love your Haiku, Regards, Kevin x

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2018 5:22:00 PM

Thank you Kevin. I appreciate your comment :)