Mindless Chatter

Furiously the flurries fly. Attached to wall, me on phone.
My Dad makes tracks, and I wonder at the dashing of snow that cools 
Mindless chatter.  Aspiring flames leap from chimney, as wind moans.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 4:28 AM
Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Gasun Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 8:09 PM
Gorgeious and creatively crafted sijo my dear poet friend Kim. I enjoyed reading this immensely today. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your win! Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Thank you, Len!
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:58 PM
Love the alliteration in that first phrase, Kim. Thanks for your partiicpation and congrats in my contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:58 PM
Thank you! This was a true story. :)
Hind Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 4:51 PM
LOVE this... mindless chatter took on a new personality
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:24 PM
Thank you so much!
Zahid Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 7:05 AM
That's a great write. I hope you are doing great. Blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 8:37 PM
Doing fine! Thank you, sweet poet! Blessings!
Canerdy Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Very expressive, descriptive, timely piece, Kim! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:41 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Very descriptive Sijo. I guess maybe you have had a little snow up your way. I can't imagine how hard that must be. It was 12 here this morning with windchill of 2 degrees just heavy frost and frozen birdbath. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 1:22 PM
Thank you, Sara. No snow yet but so cold. Brr
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 11:00 AM
- The wind of winter ... really moans, Kim - Creatively written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! We had a chimney fire when I was a teen.
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