Unseeking Seeker Poet Enclosed Rhyme

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Mindful Eye

The mindful eye
Feels each strobe
Sees soul disrobe
As heart does sigh

Impulse rise and fall
Embrace and release
Doing as we please
Whilst standing tall

Wary of indulgence 
In a narrow band
We do understand
Ego scars innocence 

21-February-2022

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Vijay Pandit February 21, 2022 at 6:30 AM Much wisdom you convey, US, in this powerful write. Words beam intellect. Unseeking Seeker February 21, 2022 at 6:38 AM Thank you, Vijay! I’m so delighted you enjoyed

Sally Eslinger February 21, 2022 at 12:03 AM How wise! Almost could say like a lyric presentation by a prosecution attorney for God gently and lyrically but powerfully done. Ideas about the soul that I hadn’t ever thought of before, kind of made my brain light up with your ideas and imagery. Thank you lots. Unseeking Seeker February 21, 2022 at 12:43 AM So happy it resonates, Sally! Thanks for dropping by