Mindful Eye

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The mindful eye Feels each strobe Sees soul disrobe As heart does sigh Impulse rise and fall Embrace and release Doing as we please Whilst standing tall Wary of indulgence In a narrow band We do understand Ego scars innocence 21-February-2022

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/21/2022 6:30:00 AM

Much wisdom you convey, US, in this powerful write. Words beam intellect.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/21/2022 6:38:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay! I’m so delighted you enjoyed

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/21/2022 12:03:00 AM

How wise! Almost could say like a lyric presentation by a prosecution attorney for God gently and lyrically but powerfully done. Ideas about the soul that I hadn’t ever thought of before, kind of made my brain light up with your ideas and imagery. Thank you lots.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/21/2022 12:43:00 AM

So happy it resonates, Sally! Thanks for dropping by