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Mindful Eye

There is this subtle, lingering feeling of lack, wherein our heart feels incomplete, with consciousness contraction persisting, far cry from our vibrancy bliss replete, as we observe our joyfulness deplete, until we choose to reject ownership of ego spawned thoughts of oneupmanship, shifting attention into staid silence, head and heart aligned, with pulse of oneness, reclaiming thus our childlike innocence. 24-September-2021
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Rose  Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 6:34 AM
I love your recipe for reclaiming innocence and our youth. You are a fountain of info this morning seeker, and I think you fit nicely into your poetic name today. Have a blessed day, Be brave !
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September 24, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Thank you, dear Mystic Rose!
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