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MINDBLOWING

MINDBLOWING when the words I read are ingested into my core with musclebrawn extreme I emancipate my ingenuity he… writes veracities with accuracy unpretentious indisputable feeding the needs tides of Vesuvius squalls on the sun purple veinlets bloodcot prisoners pet chaffinch that peck wounds clean hands of clocks folded children of villages stolen held in mushroom clouds on ocean floors until we are held no more panic stricken fish struggling to breathe as they gasp for air we do not care as Kurt said: they have no feelings even rats hold a minute’s silence as hearts pound up our throats and whiz bangs go off in heads cold thuds in guts make us spin on the spot looking up to the sky as it turns black on our backs he… writes veracities with accuracy unpretentious indisputable feeding the needs © Kim van Breda—16 December 2015 (for Mal Campbell)

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Date: 12/24/2015 7:29:00 AM
when the rains fall, they will feel so warm even in cold if they are poured through your lines. You are superb, fantastic and just wow! Its nice I visited this page. Compliments of the season dear poet!
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