Don Johnson Poet Rhyme

Mind Traveler Passion

   Mind Traveler Passion

with kisses from her knee to hip,
trembling fingers gently slip,
and damp is the night,
a sweet erotic sight,
when his tongue begins to dip,
she trembles with delight.



And there upon the mist 
The homely figure raves 
On melting wax of passion 
Two lovers taking ration   ?
2 lovers in the haze,
interlocked with heat,
thrusting like the crazed,
till hardness knows defeat,
conciousness erased:)

Don Johnson

this remote connection of ours is very intense  :)   xoxox

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Debbie Duncan December 19, 2012 at 12:24 AM I like it, I like it a lot, I'm takin love baby ;} Have a very blessed Christmas Don, thanks for reading my Grim Reaper" ;}

Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 3:34 PM "till harnes knows defeat" great line Don.

Debbie Guzzi December 3, 2012 at 2:42 PM Light & Love [but you already seem to have those ;)]

David Williams December 3, 2012 at 1:09 PM Don very sensuous and very well written, good on ya Mate...David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 2, 2012 at 11:14 PM a stunning piece of passionate poetry DON luv .. great rhyme to enhance the gentle flow to crescendo .. wow hot .. we must be on same wave length tonight ..mmmm..

Russell Sivey December 2, 2012 at 8:55 PM Wow Don, how erotic and sensual this write is my friend! You have shown a lot of passion within the bounds of this incredibly well written poem here! I am impressed with your skill at crafting this illustrious piece, Great Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 2, 2012 at 5:43 PM Hi again Don, nice one, like this . Did you read my 'Ruby Lips' you may like it xx

Terry O'Leary December 2, 2012 at 3:29 PM Yes, Don, very intense! Very 'unsettling'... but gooood... Terry