Mind That Hole

you know i've tried you know iam tierd,iam nacked two,
confusion bought a levell,yea you'r hanging there two,
ive read some signs,n read some minds,and even broke the thread,
and now i chase the emptyness it left in my head,
my fingers ache,and start to shake, my chest goe's all weasy,
i find myself laughing act the fact it aint easy,
ive been acused, i feel abused,my version goes deep,
i'll soak you with the basics if i keep you from sleep.
i gotta hole.
gotta hole gotta hole that we fall into,
we seem to reach a levell,yea your hanging there two,
is fate my own,am i the clone 'o' russian roulette,
if ya swimming in the concrete,then mind it dont set,
mind that hole.
you missed ya day you lead astry,in rasmatasem,
seems they sucked you in with their infusiasim,
all we need is all for free,and more and its true,
iam not going nowhere til i thought this thing through,
stareing at the stars,the moon lays with the night,
too my regreat did i forget that life gives life to life........mind that hole.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 30, 2016 at 12:45 PM
NEAL, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --
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